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The P2P energy trading and LEM project will not only demonstrate and validate the technology for the democratization of energy for sustainable living and…

Help us write a Powerledger style guide. Things have moved on a little since this 1996 Economist style guide was published, but it remains an authoritative document. What would you keep or change from this?

Not all writing is brilliant. And not all writing has to be brilliant. To understand this better we have to understand the contract around a piece of text. Is it like a parking ticket that doesn’t have to be particularly well written?

The best things in communication are about one thing. A piece of copy or a campaign, it always has to have an underlying unity. This comedian demonstrates the thorough and unified understanding of a single word in the English language.

What is the relationship between story, change and communication? These are three fundamental things you need to have an intuitive understanding of if you’re going to become a proficient copywriter.

What’s the change? Write on the scratchpad

The magic wand question. What’s your wish for change? By focussing on the state you find people in and where you want them to be, you can break down even quite complicated changes like giving up smoking into smaller units of a sub change.

Communication and change of state or status. This piece of footage shows a rich sequence of these elements in a 5 minute zero to hero clip that got a million hits. It tells us a lot about the relation between story and change.

Let’s look at something that’s as technical as it comes. Graphene. Without spending more than seven minutes on reading this nor being a quantum physicist, can you determine whether you would consider this well written? If so what make you think that?

All the right notes, but not necessarily in the right order. The classic Morecambe and Wise sketch which shows order matters.

Prints on the Gun exercise. Group investigation into the motor of writing. We take a piece of writing from a typical detective situation and ask how persuasion is operating in terms of beats. These are fundamental story units that are found everywhere. Google Prints on Gun exercise Other Speech materials

Anya’s blog for wormholes

The once upon a time exercise to see what happens in the kingdom. This exercise is about feeling our way to the critical ingredients of a super simple story.

Remember your school food? Unless you lived in Sweden where people report their school food as being excellent, you’ll remember it with some mixed feelings. This exercise is simple. Write to your dinner lady and get her to change what’s on the menu. Remember, she’s not minded to change anything, but something inspiring and not too manipulative might work. Write here

The hotel letter you wrote. What does it tell us about what works when we’re the other side of our own writing? What works, and what doesn’t?It may be the first time you’ve read your work as a competitor to others on exactly the same brief. Work submitted

Reading out pure drivel is interesting. We read this text out aloud while standing up. We sit down when we’ve had enough then we ask the question: when and why do we give up reading? This exercise shows how a logic or flow glitch sheds readers like a leaky pipe. You can use this tool to fix any script.

Mr White, a la Breaking Bad, narrated in super simple storyline. Complete with predicament, dilemma, and character arc. It shows us how clear storytelling can be.

Martin Luther King’s 1963 speech here in an abridged form shows some of the key beats of a great piece of writing. From fact to inspiring principle; it also shows how to manage conflicting interests by finding the largest common denominator.

Winston Churchill’s finest hour speech is a masterclass in structure. Probably the most famous speech in the English language it shows the power of going taking an idea to its logical conclusion.

Scrambled challenge

Two presidents, two inaugural speeches, in the early mid section where the pain problem or situation gets developed. Can you guess who did which on? Spoiler alert: don’t watch the Video or transcript if you’ve not done the problem. What does this tell us about quality as opposed to what we think is quality?

Working with really simple types helps gets things clear. We do a lot of this on the course. Reducing complex multi-stakeholder interests to one dimension makes things much simpler and doable.

How do you sell one of these cars to one of the Mr Men? This exercise clears out all of the clutter in our thinking. It also helps us get to grips with the difference between features and benefits, because benefits connect to the psychology of an individual where features do not.

Stephen Hawking’s book sold more copies than the bible, 9 million copies in forty languages. And yet the subject matter is to say the least, quite complex. His gift is that he’s trying to help you understand, not to bamboozle you. His opening story demonstrates how the entire theme of the book can be summarised and illustrated in a single child like story.

Some brands have a clear consistent voice, and then there are all the others than merge into a great nothingness. How do brands connect with us as human beings and why are they so powerful? We look at the fundamental jungian archetypes and practice working with them.

What makes big ideas? Time for a quick look at creativity as a thing in itself. Finally if you’re working on a project, we can arrange an Skype call two weeks later, and see how you’re getting on with putting everything into practice.

What should a brief look like? Here’s a super simple one, and also a brief reconstructed from Old Spice.

According to Larry McEnerney, University of Chicago Writing Program, every successful piece of academic writing has the same structure. It goes like this: “You and many others think X. But I’m here to tell you that you and they, are wrong.” By the end of the paper you have been sold Y. And being corrected represents the value exchange for the effort you’ve put into reading it.

A value exchange is about attention for ideas that have value. Why would you read through a document about packet switching? Because Sir Tim Berner’s Lee’s writing could tell you things that changed what you did the next morning.